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If times have become rough,
Don't worry, do not crack.
Simply lay yourself down,
Gently down, on your back.
It's a natural thing,
Please be not afraid,
Just open yourself up
To a gift surely god made.
As my oil drips down,
Caressing skin, soft and fair,
You can feel your tensions
Drift into nothing and air.
And as you then walk away,
And your knees turn to jelly,
That is when you know,
It was I who rubbed your belly.
©2005-2009 ~redkefka
:iconredkefka:

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For anyone who doesn't know this was written to take part in a competition been run by fluffypixies so please vote for me or ask the judges nicely on my behalf, whoever they are. Or just laugh at/with me...

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:iconfluffypixies:
:rofl: this is good!!:D lmao

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Friendship is like peeing on yourself: everyone can see it, but only you get the warm feeling that it brings.
:iconharle-quin:
very good! very good! your entry to the competition has been accepted...let's see if you win good luck!

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<3 With all my black little heart <3

x~xHarle-Quinx~x
:iconthousandfaces:
::primal scream:: BELLY RUBS!!!!!!!!!!

::small smile:: I loved that, it was very good! Funny, but still intelligent sounding, huzzah!

Your Obedient Servant,

T.F.

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"I want to walk into the sea and never come back. I want the tide to take me out of me and give me someone else. Maybe for a half hour or so. That would be good...wouldn't it...?"
:iconeternal-unique:
hahahahahahaha oh crazy crazy crazy :D :D really good though. and i will laugh at you and with you for writing that

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Did you expect it all to stop at the wave of your hand? The sun is just going to drop if it’s night you demand
:iconredkefka:
=p thanks :D

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Into the orchard I walk peering way past the gate.
Wilted scenes for us who couldn't wait.
Drained by the coldest caress, stalking shadows ahead.
Halo of death, all I see is departure.
Mourner's lament but it's me who's the martyr.
:iconxetha:
heheh.. cute :D and funny and weird.... i just love it :D

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He is only a stranger, whom I have met before.
:iconredkefka:
hehe thanks :D

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Immerse your soul with love

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